Comments by All Members
- "reminiscent of P. Floyd - In The Flesh ..... impressive thought by thought detail.... cleverly divorced from the scene. nicely done."
Posted by elisa on "groupies" by denver nitze
- "over a year later... here ya go this is a poem about losing my daughters and wishing i could bleed for them (sometimes i do) and take away the pain felt. thats all no suicide poem here, oh no but definitely a death poem. thank you for reading. ~tangel"
Posted by denver nitze on "bleed for the angels" by denver nitze
- "Well I'm all wet now. I looked at your picture. and pictured you with her. It made me quiver.Invisioning ya liquor. If it was me I'd probably Dick her~ha,ha~"
Posted by lajeeves on "top shelf liquor" by denver nitze
- "I think this is a very witty presentation of something recognizably and understandably human... that is, I can respond to it in a way that is not utter flabbergasted mystification because it actually makes sense on many levels rather than not making sense and forcing me to try to make sense of a vast array of disconnected and disjointed imagery without cohesion or apparent intention, but then all opinions are equal insofar as they are opinions...keep up the great work!"
Posted by Unknown on "filling my gash" by denver nitze
- "Too funny! And how! Love the innuendo, wonderfully entertaining. Dare I say feminism? A crafty revelation of gender difference that strikes to the core of stereotypes and presumptions... it's as if it forces the reader into the presumptions that operate between those oversized gaps within the market of gendered existence. Thanks!! *walks away still laughing* Great write"
Posted by Unknown on "filling my gash" by denver nitze
- "wow, you got a comment from *THE* DP! I've never been anywhere near that honored! ;) Hope you don't mind, but I let a few folks at work read this one and laugh with me. :P"
Posted by Sketso on "filling my gash" by denver nitze
- "LOL, I admit, I chuckled... but ya know, the depots here are much better than that. Quite an amusing look into daily pain! :P"
Posted by Sketso on "filling my gash" by denver nitze
- "I love the way this reads, definately a favorite of mine. It's the sadness and pain we must not forget, yet leave behind to become more."
Posted by Unknown on "bleed for the angels" by denver nitze
- "this is my tribute to all the women who brave the oversized aisles of home depot and walk the plank of testosterone. have you ever been looked at like sylvester looks at tweety? go to home depot and give it a try. "
Posted by denver nitze on "filling my gash" by denver nitze
- "excellent wryte!! Bukowski wrote one of my fav's that ended: "they can never get all of me"... i don't know if i believe this anymore..."
Posted by zanewill on "so high above pain" by denver nitze
- "oh my, no need to bow...I ain't on no pedestal ;) and your work is definitely not shit.Learning how to be happy can be hard.I had to rewire my brain first,but it's worth it ♥"
Posted by Unknown on "so high above pain" by denver nitze
- "lol. just figured out how to work this thing. let me try again;
thank you. *blushes* its great to know that someone i admire so, would read my shit. as unfortunate as it is i can never forget my past or the pains felt, but i am starting to learn how to be happy. finding true love in the darkness was my first step. thank you again *bows to mab*"
Posted by denver nitze on "so high above pain" by denver nitze
- "thank you. *blushes* its great to know that someone i admire so, would read my shit. as unfortunate as it is i can never forget my past or the pains felt, but i am starting to learn how to be happy. finding true love in the darkness was my first step. thank you again *bows to mab*"
Posted by denver nitze on "so high above pain" by denver nitze
- "if we forget the pain, there is a better chance it will repeat itself to refresh our memory.Love shows us how to keep going when muddling through our past..."
Posted by Unknown on "so high above pain" by denver nitze
- "thank you. my vision was two people concieving a child in the waves of a harsh ocean that sucks them away killing all three of them. thanks for commenting. "
Posted by denver nitze on "grasp to give in" by denver nitze
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