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- "i like that idea. i generally improv the chorus everytime just to keep it original, i just write one to have a hard song. very nice idea though, *grabs guitar* i'll let you know what i come up with. thanks. !tangel
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Posted by denver nitze on "hermetic doors opened" by denver nitze
- "If I were you, I'd choose two or maybe three little stanza's to treat as your chorus. So you don't sing the same lyrics for the chorus each time it comes around. I don't know about you, but too much repetition can ruin a song for me. It makes it boring."
Posted by Alanarchy on "hermetic doors opened" by denver nitze
- "yeah, i'm totally picturing this one with a small strings section as well as piano and acoustic guitar. :) i still need to write a chorus though and edit it a bit. thank you for your comment. :)"
Posted by denver nitze on "hermetic doors opened" by denver nitze
- ""Lost within, and lost without/Carrion dreams turn to lust/Reverie all day long/Dreams turned to dust" Awesome lines. Love to hear this with music. Feels like it calls for piano, the most. To me anyway. Either way, I dig it hardcore."
Posted by Alanarchy on "hermetic doors opened" by denver nitze
- "*put her heart on paper
sealed it with a kiss* ..the mind of a beautiful genious.....i love that i get the chance to be inside it for a split second,,,totally dig it babe,,,"
Posted by GraveFlower on "hermetic doors opened" by denver nitze
- "it is. its my take on the bullshit happening to us in america a few years back when it was starting to snowball towards invading iraq. thank you for the comment. :)"
Posted by denver nitze on "lost within" by denver nitze
- "Interesting Simple Piece! Don't know if I'd file it under political though! Unless it's cryptic message was it's political overtone! Nice Piece Though!"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "lost within" by denver nitze
- "i like this piece. it's very raw and honest. it's hard to forgive others, especially parents, but it's feels so much better to release that pain and carry on with your life. "
Posted by Syringe on "breastfeeding me lies" by denver nitze
- ""watching my silence an oath to myself"
that line really sticks out to me,,,good write.....for real...~D
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Posted by GraveFlower on "groupies" by denver nitze
- "just read this. (i was so drunk when i wrote it) very unusual for me, i think i was trying to fuck with the usual smoothness i write. mix up the flow abit and tell those groupy scum how i feel. ok done ranting on my own shit... "
Posted by denver nitze on "groupies" by denver nitze
- "i've completely tapped my artificial nice reserve.... now i live in fear of being confronted by that special kind of doe-eyed shell of vacancy.... ..i'm teetering on supernova... haha."
Posted by elisa on "groupies" by denver nitze
- "i like 'fans' can't stand groupies though. they just want to fuck someone so they can 'feel' the music. they do buy records though so i find myself being way too artificially nice and i hate it, this is my way of saying i hate them without 'them' knowing i guess. really thats what i'm here for, hiding somewhere open so i can scream and be heard by a non-biast ear. "
Posted by denver nitze on "groupies" by denver nitze
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