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  • "its the culmination of emotives and images that make you just so sound and yet irrational; i lvoe the contrast, the odd tilts and sways....the ending of this felt like a beginning...and a final realisation....happy new year."
    Posted by Unknown on "chartreuse and cigarettes" by verablue
  • "i'm working on it...got plenty of crap writes....just cant seem to bring myself to post them. maybe i'll post them as members only reads or something..."
    Posted by verablue on "bourbon scented lies." by verablue
  • "Gripping and obscure, in only the way you can manage, as I've noticed true of your writes. This was extremely well done."
    Posted by Unknown on "bourbon scented lies." by verablue
  • "Totally absorbing and written with honest philosophy. I can't see anything wrong with this..I just wish you'd post more. Brilliant piece :)"
    Posted by carlosjackal on "bourbon scented lies." by verablue
  • "thank you...i've finally been writing a bit more...not really happy with most of it, but a few peices will make it up here anyways....though i'm out of space since my account expired, so i wont be posting too often."
    Posted by verablue on "bourbon scented lies." by verablue
  • "and indepth, and intense look into thoughts that are those kinds of thoughts that you don't want to let broil too long. Like alice, sitting across the table at some wierd apathetic mad hatter. Very, very cool. Missed your stuff. :D"
    Posted by Alanarchy on "bourbon scented lies." by verablue
  • "the twist in this is compelling. felt a bit self-loathing in a way. i, more than anyone, know this. much too well. you're beautiful."
    Posted by dying angel on "monochrome dreams." by verablue
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