Comments by All Members
- "Wow I've thought those thoughts almost every day of my life so this one really hits close to home. I really enjoyed it. ~Urban Shipwreck~"
Posted by Unknown on "Thinking" by asailorsangel
- "I really liked the second and third to last stanzas. Nothing seems more frustrating than "square one". ~Urban Shipwreck~"
Posted by Unknown on "Revolving Door" by asailorsangel
- "This reminds me of the grids and meditation theory in metaphysics. I like it. ~Urban Shipwreck~"
Posted by Unknown on "Reflected" by asailorsangel
- "The refreshing things about your poems are they are not like a lot of the others on this site, full of o' poop, you write with a great sense of what the world is. I respect that. I think what I said made sense too?"
Posted by Unknown on "Revolving Door" by asailorsangel
- "Great poem. One question, though, does the dick silence the mouth, or does the mouth keep the dick in Sunday School for all of eternity?"
Posted by Unknown on "Revolving Door" by asailorsangel
- "so peaceful...It flowed beautifully and it sets this wonderful mood. yes the lovers seems made for each-other! well done! {dia}"
Posted by diavolessa on "Lines" by asailorsangel
- "This was really good. I enjoyed the way it flowed and what I got from it. Nice work indeed."
Posted by Loomer on "Lines" by asailorsangel
- "We all go through nasty phases and the ones that truely love us will always be there, no matter how rough the trip may get. Yay!"
Posted by Unknown on "Break in Space" by asailorsangel
- "Kind of reminds me of being suspended, as a baby in your mothers womb. Safe, happy, content, until the process of birth spits you unto the horrid world to face your future."
Posted by Unknown on "No longer suspended" by asailorsangel
- "i like this one! i really have to agree that one you fallen in love and then trying to go back to that time in your life can be the worst, you totally grasp the concept in this poem and embraced it throughout the whole poem! my props!"
Posted by finaldestiny on "No longer suspended" by asailorsangel
- "i believe there is a God, and i really felt this... i don't know why he's with me either... makes no sense in our minds at least..."
Posted by Unknown on "Please God" by asailorsangel
- "I feel like I'm lost in the abyss for the first few stanzas and then BOOM, the question we all know and love. This is great work."
Posted by SageoPhoneus on "Direction??" by asailorsangel
- "Being paranoid about what others may want you to be? That is interesting! I like the poem muchos! I feel like I am that way sometimes! "
Posted by Unknown on "Direction??" by asailorsangel
- "Mirrors are scary. A whole 'nother world exsist on the other side. So many different dimensions to life! Good write!"
Posted by Unknown on "Reflected" by asailorsangel
- "Markus no need to keep your mouth shut I appreciate your comments and who is to say if there is a God or not I think there are higher forces and powers........."
Posted by asailorsangel on "Please God" by asailorsangel
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