Comments by All Members
- "this was beautiful, straight to the point, although i would also agree with carlos because people will remember you even if you think you are passing through the world."
Posted by Lady Grinning Soul on "Slow Motion In A Dream" by LOKI
- "Yes, sometimes it is the voices outside our heads out to get us! Being face naked in society in itself complicates things!I agree with Carlos tho-cause I wondered if you had left. So there! A:D."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Slow Motion In A Dream" by LOKI
- "A fantastic poem. I would only change the last line as I believe you're likely to be remembered for being yourself than hiding behind a mask."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Slow Motion In A Dream" by LOKI
- "thank you
I was inspired by a quote
Better to be hated for who you are
than loved for who your not"
Posted by LOKI on "Slow Motion In A Dream" by LOKI
- "once upon a time ...man 'discovered' the power of an all knowing yet... unseen God.......absolute dominion...with a complete absence of responsibility.....parishioners bow in fear... ministers bow for greed....i dig this ....well said."
Posted by elisa on "They Live in Fear" by LOKI
