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- "even though the stanzas are short this has lots of impact, although the personal message is lost on me, but the word choice is somehow whisperingly fierce....very nicely scathing"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "fuck your disease." by i tremble
- "maybe stabbing a snake? take the pieces you want from him/her and leave the rest, but dont forget to learn, so in that respect, i hope there will be some effect. things will get better kiddo, life is full of curve balls."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "fuck your disease." by i tremble
- "gha!!!!!!! i asked and i received! doesnt i just urk you, the whole fall out of whatever? this stirkes me as strong, and the obviously blunt tone made me think of a pivited feet in the dirt, a strong stance... "
Posted by Bella Butchery on "fuck your disease." by i tremble
- "What a story. I think that I will just have to fav you because you are such a talanted story teller be with poem or not. Fantastic."
Posted by torn_beauty on "queen of winter." by i tremble
- "I'm a pathological liar. A serial embellisher. This struck a chord... It's beautifully written and hit the right notes. Thank you for sharing."
Posted by nur hidayah on "story weaver." by i tremble
- "damn, killer ending. i saw this before i went to bed last night. i was too tired to read and the first thing i rememberedthis morning was that i tremble posted hehe. you're words shatter. "
Posted by dying angel on "story weaver." by i tremble
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