all tangled in your heartstrings.

By i tremble

I dance
to you upon
crippled feet.

Lips
stitched shut,
I cannot speak.

Or at least
not well enough
to explain
things that
I wish
I could.

My veins,
they pulse
and pound
in violent blue.

I want
you to know
that they
do it all
for you.





You ignite me.

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© 2007 jodeanna franks
Published on Saturday, May 26, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Bella Butchery On Thursday, July 12, 2007, Bella Butchery (696)By person wrote:

    i cant beleive i missed this one... what a lucky person... i hope you showed them this.

  • Grim_Sorrow On Wednesday, May 30, 2007, Grim_Sorrow (74)By person wrote:

    so much said in so few words, I like.

  • Army Barbie On Sunday, May 27, 2007, Army Barbie (316)By person wrote:

    This grabbed me full force and gave me the hardest kiss I've had in a while. I fell in love with you ;) Beautiful...only love could bring something so amazing out.

  • Tania On Sunday, May 27, 2007, Tania (192)By person wrote:

    love writes like this.. blunt and hold alot of punch.

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