Comments by All Members
- "Truly a masterpiece of both form and beauty, the 7 days corresponding with Seven flowers and 7 insights is well rendered and although wandering into a pre-formed idea still expressed majestic wonder and a spontaneity :)"
Posted by Solace on "Days of the Flower Elegy" by Rebel_not_Radical
- ""stains of week old coffee" I have been seduced by this great poem; it holds the things we should not see, but can not see. Those things that never happen, yet do. Well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Gods on the Street Corner" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "goddamn..i loved the whole concept of this..traveling through days of the week, very creative and beautiful wordings..i can't get over how spectacular this write is. painfully beautiful. thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Days of the Flower Elegy" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "Rebel head..this was a true write, welcome to the sanctuary for the deformed..no thats not quite right is it? Hey..I was a God on the street corner last night..I didn't kidnap any mortals though, fuckin' hell...damn. I like this post, good poetry here. Co"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Gods on the Street Corner" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "This was a good poem for this day and age, I love your writing it speaks the truth and a little more truth in the world doesn't hurt ~Gothic"
Posted by Dissolving Poet on "Soldier" by Rebel_not_Radical
- "omg this broke me into a million pieces. I'm in tears reading this, and just know that flowers do hold special meanings. Wow, I'm in awe of this, and the days, perfection! Butterfly orchids, just brilliant!!!! Thank you for this. Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "Days of the Flower Elegy" by Rebel_not_Radical
- ""Clenching our fists like loaded guns" again, terrific imagery & wording, i really liked this..the last two lines struck me as being kind of sad..like you were almost reminding yourself of what you were doing..excellent."
Posted by Unknown on "Soldier" by Rebel_not_Radical
- ""Epiphainies shower in aurora borealis
We melted millions of brain cells But We became Gods on our street corner..." i very much enjoyed the imagery in this. great write, welcome to dp. "
Posted by Unknown on "Gods on the Street Corner" by Rebel_not_Radical