Comments by All Members
- "I felt anxious as i read this. At first I wondered if this is what a deer thinks while looking into headlights, then I remembered how I felt when choosing which parent to live with when I was younger. A stirring of emotions was definitely achieved by this piece."
Posted by MESUN on "Wall of Arrows" by Silence
- "This reminds me of a dream I had a couple weeks ago, I got killed in the end though...Nice write.-Airi"
Posted by Niemand on "Wall of Arrows" by Silence
- "I don't this about many, but yourse was done well enough: THis was mind boggling. I cannot believe the grasp it had on my mind, making me want to leap through the screen and clutch each word close to my heart. Perfection."
Posted by Loketha Angel on "Skin" by Silence
- "Curious and kind of creepy...leaves my brain questioning as to the why.I can only conjecture."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Skin" by Silence
- "like paper, so vivid, and i can stand it oh so well, good write, ~*dani*~"
Posted by GraveFlower on "Skin" by Silence
- "a dermis scrape of fine .. powdered tissue..... of fortified flesh....very well said."
Posted by elisa on "Skin" by Silence
- "The flow, the striking image it creates, I must say that this turns you inside out for the broken beatuy that the poem portrays "
Posted by Unknown on "My Withered Black Rose" by Silence
- "you captured and conveyed a sense of longing and sadness...i saw that rose..vibrant and fresh become withered and brittle upon the grave..this was lovely ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "My Withered Black Rose" by Silence
- "why does everything always have my name in it? it's sweet, but that makes me depressed to think that i just keep bleeding and that i have thorns.. its a good write, but it scares me a little"
Posted by mywristshurt on "My Withered Black Rose" by Silence
- "ohhhh wow im in awe of this write... as for me i luv my pain and misery, i dont think i can live without it... i've felt/lived with it so long i dont remember who/how i was before i had it... it has become home for me..."
Posted by Mahakala on "My Withered Black Rose" by Silence
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