Comments by All Members
- "ya know, i often write about things that i don't understand-suicide, abuse, harming one's self- in order to understand it. i hope that that is what this is i hope you don't really see yourself slitting your wrists. nice write tho.TPD"
Posted by TornPaperDoll on "That look" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "Hmmm...yeah those one night stands without the rubber always ends like this. lol. i like the anger here. you do well with non-rhyming poems, it still flows well. good job. TPD"
Posted by TornPaperDoll on "Fuck you" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "i love the first half up to "i die in your arms now you feel me" this half is very strong and vivid the end kinda loses me...but nice work.ima read more of u.TPD"
Posted by TornPaperDoll on "I sit and cry" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
- "I can relate to that all to well, sounds like my situation with my ex. very powerful and emotional... brough some tears to my eyes. awesome piece.
hope things get better.-monika
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Posted by Unknown on "Josh" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201
