Comments by All Members

"I kinda agree with you, here... the vulgarity is a bit off-putting for something that starts so majestically. "
Posted by Cassette on "Milk Carton Unicorn" by Zahgurim

"the last stanza is brilliant in an already fine poem. Nice write. JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "Not My Color" by Zahgurim

"I still come back here, to this, with love. What a beautiful poem."
Posted by Mute Serenade on "Sugarland Methods" by Zahgurim

"This is quite magnificent. The last unicorn is and has always been one of my favourite tales, but this also makes me think of the movie Legend, where the darkness came when the unicorns were captured and one was slaughtered. Night came at the death of the male because his mate fell into such a sadness that she could only manage to give light for half a day...still the present day implications are so strong for more than fantasy and I want to seize the day and fight that red bull away. Such a creative and flowing piece."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Milk Carton Unicorn" by Zahgurim

"wow......I'm kinda speechless."
Posted by Unknown on "Milk Carton Unicorn" by Zahgurim

"....but i just dont feel like it. heh I liked this"
Posted by Unknown on "Sample This" by Zahgurim

"Holy fuck weed eater orange crack babies! That was awesome!"
Posted by Unknown on "Pain Whore" by Zahgurim

"holy shit the rythm and flow and just this poem holy shit"
Posted by Unknown on "Pain Whore" by Zahgurim

"It makes your mind whirl, and then it makes sense."
Posted by Miztaken4beauty on "Army of None" by Zahgurim

"Intense, very fast paced, or so it seemed to me."
Posted by Unknown on "Beauty Lies In The Eyes Of A Cannibal" by Zahgurim

"Hell yeah.. this was the shit!! I absoultely loved this!! "
Posted by Disassembly Boy on "Sample This" by Zahgurim

"the metamorphosis of endurance...i like this alot...well said."
Posted by elisa on "Like Butter" by Zahgurim

"...this was captivating...breathtaking...stunning ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Brand New Chasm (Version Upgrade)" by Zahgurim

"holy fuck this incredible some original languag and image construction - slammin I love it to death - r u kidding me: 'in the minotaurs house of lies' oh my giddy aunt!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Torpid Existence Of A Struggling Slumber" by Zahgurim

"hmmmmmmm wow, this is intense. I will have to come back when I can read more clearly. but very intense and i think there is a lot here ha"
Posted by Unknown on "The Torpid Existence Of A Struggling Slumber" by Zahgurim

"Hmm. This was razor sharp though I think I probably missed the specific direction the general assumptions I gathered made me want to hop on the lynch mob train. Intense. ~Ship!"
Posted by Unknown on "... have no wrath, like an Idol scorned." by Zahgurim

"I'm not sure completely where this is pointed... consumerism, modernism... either way a very pwerful and abstract write."
Posted by Guillotine on "... have no wrath, like an Idol scorned." by Zahgurim

"Mmmmmm, the fearsome voices squealing paranoia in our brains. it shakes and brakes me, but still i love it. The disturbing pleading of this piece appeals to me greatly. +_+"
Posted by bloody LOVEly on "Cock Tease" by Zahgurim

"I, not unlike Sentient Ignorance below me, am disgusted. i love it. SHUT UP! i know i like it alot."
Posted by Possesion on "Cock Tease" by Zahgurim

"I found this funny. It made me smile. -kitty"
Posted by Sticky Kitty on "Cock Tease" by Zahgurim

"...I am disgusted... WOW great write, but eeew, keep up the great work, just not... eeeew"
Posted by Sentient Ignorance on "Cock Tease" by Zahgurim

"I like the way you write...awesome job with this.."
Posted by AHHH on "Kill The Contract" by Zahgurim

"I agree, enchanting is a good word for this. I liked the repetion, but the vulgarity taints it a little. Can't you say it differently? Hate can be beautiful, it really can."
Posted by Liz on "Milk Carton Unicorn" by Zahgurim

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