Comments by All Members
- "This poem has a certain ring to it... I can't quite put my finger on it, but I really like it. Crista is right, you are a very good poet."
Posted by Thorn on "The Risk" by up_at_five
- "...to some of us, it's more fun to make something out of pure structure; yeah, it's a dying art, but some of us strive to keep it breathing..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "The Risk" by up_at_five
- "I agree with Stalker!!! I so rarely run across this form...and it is one of my favorites. I love this...everything about it wondyful. I want to read more..."
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "The Risk" by up_at_five
- "...holy crap, metre...! you actually know metre...! finally I see people out there that still know how to use that..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "The Risk" by up_at_five
- "....i like....it's get much better towards the end....and i like the paragraph about the willow the most......keep it up dad :)"
Posted by vaultgrl on "The Risk" by up_at_five
