Comments by All Members
- "wow that was deep I think about so much im sorry you felt this way now or at this moment but just writing it out for others will let us know we are not alone"
Posted by Unknown on "Sorry" by LovelyLady
- "ahh, these times hurt, but they come and go with the flow of the moon's time. this was very raw, i like"
Posted by Muse on "letting you go" by LovelyLady
- "i know this decision is hard. but I will be with you all the time no matter where you go. you can do it, you are strong"
Posted by IShouldEqualYou on "Sorry" by LovelyLady
- "how's this for honors english knowledge: "there are 3 lovely written quatrains, with a lovely end rhyme scheme." lmao but seriously rachael this is really good, reminds me of me a couple years ago."
Posted by IShouldEqualYou on "letting you go" by LovelyLady
- ""you gave me your heart/and i threw it away" So have I been blamed for doing just that...but the irony is...that he had asked me to. It's a self-destructive crevice of hell and pain...this is beautiful. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "letting you go" by LovelyLady
- "Wow...I didn't see this untill after I wrote mine "Letting Go"...so sorry about the similar titles, but they could be answers to one another. I love it."
Posted by Soulfire on "letting you go" by LovelyLady
- "it hurts...i know..but you'll get over it..faster than you think. i feel pity to the one whose heart you broke..but thats life...-_-"
Posted by Grey Lies on "letting you go" by LovelyLady
- "the pain and the feeling of what i can try n explain as confusion is expressed very well in this poem. its lovely in a dark painful poetic way..."
Posted by Unknown on "letting you go" by LovelyLady
- "i love how everything just flowed into the very last verse. It was amazing how you could put these words together.. although this is the only poem i see on your name, the more you put up, this one i think is the best"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Break" by LovelyLady
- "So why endure it at all? Quit it cold turkey, that pain will last shorter, than enduring the long term abuse that comes along with what you describe here.
Decent write. Welcome to Dp."
Posted by Err0r on "Break" by LovelyLady
- "Yes I come across a lot of writes like this.Its hard not to sink into the stasis when life seems to get on top. A person can always find a way. Just look at how successful the Spice Girls were.Fuck if they can make a life for themselves, any one can!"
Posted by Shadow Rapture on "Break" by LovelyLady
- "there are six billion people on this planet..remember that at all times"
Posted by Unknown on "Break" by LovelyLady
