Break

By LovelyLady

You're losing me
I'm slipping away
I just can't take the pain
How do you not realize what you've done to me?
My life is not your game.

All the stupid things you do
and things that will be done
I ask myself how much more can i take?
how long wil it be ..
before i break?

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© 2006 CrazyBitch
Published on Tuesday, April 11, 2006.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • mywristshurt On Tuesday, April 18, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    i love how everything just flowed into the very last verse. It was amazing how you could put these words together.. although this is the only poem i see on your name, the more you put up, this one i think is the best

  • Err0r On Tuesday, April 11, 2006, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    So why endure it at all? Quit it cold turkey, that pain will last shorter, than enduring the long term abuse that comes along with what you describe here. Decent write. Welcome to Dp.

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