letting you go

By LovelyLady

You looked into my eyes
and begged me not to go
i told you i love you
but i had to let go

And the pain deep inside
is something you should know
tears welled up in my eyes
and i let your hand go

Now i don't know what to do
I don't know what to say
you gave me your heart
and i threw it away

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© 2006 LovelyLady
Published on Saturday, April 22, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Muse On Wednesday, May 24, 2006, Muse (57)By person wrote:

    ahh, these times hurt, but they come and go with the flow of the moon's time. this was very raw, i like

  • A former member wrote: "you gave me your heart/and i threw it away" So have I been blamed for doing just that...but the irony is...that he had asked me to. It's a self-destructive crevice of hell and pain...this is beautiful. *Evangel*

  • Soulfire On Saturday, April 22, 2006, Soulfire (97)By person wrote:

    Wow...I didn't see this untill after I wrote mine "Letting Go"...so sorry about the similar titles, but they could be answers to one another. I love it.

  • Grey Lies On Saturday, April 22, 2006, Grey Lies (186)By person wrote:

    it hurts...i know..but you'll get over it..faster than you think. i feel pity to the one whose heart you broke..but thats life...-_-

  • A former member wrote: the pain and the feeling of what i can try n explain as confusion is expressed very well in this poem. its lovely in a dark painful poetic way...

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