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letting you go
By LovelyLady
You looked into my eyes
and begged me not to go
i told you i love you
but i had to let go
And the pain deep inside
is something you should know
tears welled up in my eyes
and i let your hand go
Now i don't know what to do
I don't know what to say
you gave me your heart
and i threw it away
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© 2006 LovelyLady
Published on Saturday, April 22, 2006.
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"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, May 24, 2006, Muse
(57)
wrote:
ahh, these times hurt, but they come and go with the flow of the moon's time. this was very raw, i like
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A former member wrote:
"you gave me your heart/and i threw it away" So have I been blamed for doing just that...but the irony is...that he had asked me to. It's a self-destructive crevice of hell and pain...this is beautiful. *Evangel*
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On Saturday, April 22, 2006, Soulfire
(96) wrote:
Wow...I didn't see this untill after I wrote mine "Letting Go"...so sorry about the similar titles, but they could be answers to one another. I love it.
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On Saturday, April 22, 2006, Grey Lies
(185) wrote:
it hurts...i know..but you'll get over it..faster than you think. i feel pity to the one whose heart you broke..but thats life...-_-
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A former member wrote:
the pain and the feeling of what i can try n explain as confusion is expressed very well in this poem. its lovely in a dark painful poetic way...
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