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"I like the solid numbers followed by an infinite."
Posted by Doc on "One" by monalisamarie

"By the gods! 'a no-name doll without a face,hanging from a limbless tree' - what a sensational line right there - bang! And you sucked into the Mona realms of passion and dark emotion. Holy skeletal trees! "
Posted by Shadow Rapture on "The Mind of Mona" by monalisamarie

"quite a unique way of expressing the thing you call your mind...nice job"
Posted by Unknown on "The Mind of Mona" by monalisamarie

"You have a home at Dark Poetry. Wonderful write here. Keep posting and I will knock again and again."
Posted by Equinox Asylum on "The Mind of Mona" by monalisamarie

"Just beautiful."
Posted by Equinox Asylum on "Cascades and Caskets" by monalisamarie

"I would leave an orchid, but your words are so alive."
Posted by Equinox Asylum on "Funeral Flowers" by monalisamarie

"You are killing me with verse of magical quality."
Posted by Equinox Asylum on "I Shall Ignore Your Pleas" by monalisamarie

"Sad. If this was you, I am stoked to see you made it through. I, for one, am enjoying your poems. It would be a tragedy to deprive the likes of me of your work. "
Posted by Equinox Asylum on "Bleeding to Death in a Pool of Unforgetful Memories" by monalisamarie

"Fantastic surprise. I love my guitar in very much the same manner. I call her April Rain. Wonderful poem."
Posted by Equinox Asylum on "Non-traditional Romance" by monalisamarie

"Wow. Holy poetry! The fact that no one has commented on this is a tragedy. Free verse is not the only form that matters. This is stunning. A fav."
Posted by Equinox Asylum on "The Oak Grove" by monalisamarie

"Poetry in a poem? How wonderful. I luv this. I have been floored."
Posted by Equinox Asylum on "Revolutionary Daggerology" by monalisamarie

""WE DANCE TO OUR BROKEN MUSIC, " .........NICE ...I like VERY MUCH!!!!"
Posted by LiP Stiches on "Non-traditional Romance" by monalisamarie

"I could feel my head being slapped around left to right, like watching a tennis match being played at 200 mph. Bizarre!"
Posted by Shadow Rapture on "Revolutionary Daggerology" by monalisamarie

"I love the offbeat at the end of the poem. The sudden stop in the rhythm is dead classy."
Posted by antiScripsony on "Revolutionary Daggerology" by monalisamarie

"This was heartfelt, made you bleed open onto the screen."
Posted by Dissolving Poet on "Cascades and Caskets" by monalisamarie

"made me smile, thank u:)"
Posted by Unknown on "Non-traditional Romance" by monalisamarie

"I know how it feels to be so alone all it feels like is to face death and get it over with. I recently just got to this stage again so for now I will strugel. I love how you expressed this. It is written very well. "
Posted by Unknown on "Bleeding to Death in a Pool of Unforgetful Memories" by monalisamarie

"I liked this one alot, great imagery, and very easy to read, nice flow as well. Great job ~Josh~"
Posted by Emptyness Inside Me on "I Shall Ignore Your Pleas" by monalisamarie

"very sad, I dont believe in suicide, but this piece was written very well, good job ~Josh~"
Posted by Emptyness Inside Me on "Bleeding to Death in a Pool of Unforgetful Memories" by monalisamarie

"Well, I rather like it. I think you did a good job, especially on the ryhme. I can't rhyme for beans."
Posted by Angst Queen on "I Shall Ignore Your Pleas" by monalisamarie

"mature and heartfelt; great work. i look forward to many more."
Posted by manicheism on "Cascades and Caskets" by monalisamarie

""I wandered alone, I wandered alone I have lusted after violent things"- beautiful and powerful...kinda sexy too...don't ask why :) great write ~sinful~ "
Posted by Unknown on "The Apparition of Renitent Remedy" by monalisamarie

"this is brilliantly crafted .. amazing stuff ~V"
Posted by mozarts cat on "The Apparition of Renitent Remedy" by monalisamarie

"...but what a wonderful way to go... very nice"
Posted by elisa on "The Apparition of Renitent Remedy" by monalisamarie

"and so may tragedy strike us all down like mothmen caught in the flames of your words... brilliant."
Posted by Guillotine on "The Apparition of Renitent Remedy" by monalisamarie

"fabulously raw write .. I adore the final line ~V"
Posted by mozarts cat on "Gunshot Wound to the Sky" by monalisamarie

"*You- that is."
Posted by veingo on "Gunshot Wound to the Sky" by monalisamarie

"Woah! I really like the imagery here. Yuo have proven a great addition to our littel group. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Gunshot Wound to the Sky" by monalisamarie

"Ok, for those following the story, sorry it took so long to get the seventh verse (my postcard was slow). For those interested in structure, I would like to point out each line is composed of seven syllables."
Posted by monalisamarie on "The Oak Grove" by monalisamarie

"brilliantly genius."
Posted by ShardsofSilence on "Funeral Flowers" by monalisamarie

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