The Apparition of Renitent Remedy

By monalisamarie

A thought clouds the mind in mourning
Alas this voyage is nearly over
The memory in distressed mind is mire
I am fading farther into the fire

Please keep your icy fingers from my skin
Open me up; pierce me from within
Abandon what you abhor-your debility
I wonder if you can discern my frailty

O it’s over; I have already died.
I have screamed in the shadows of the night
I wandered alone, I wandered alone
I have lusted after violent things

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© 2006 monalisamarie
Published on Saturday, March 25, 2006.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: "I wandered alone, I wandered alone I have lusted after violent things"- beautiful and powerful...kinda sexy too...don't ask why :) great write ~sinful~

  • mozarts cat On Sunday, March 26, 2006, mozarts cat (183)By person wrote:

    this is brilliantly crafted .. amazing stuff ~V

  • elisa On Saturday, March 25, 2006, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    ...but what a wonderful way to go... very nice

  • Guillotine On Saturday, March 25, 2006, Guillotine (168)By person wrote:

    and so may tragedy strike us all down like mothmen caught in the flames of your words... brilliant.

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