Comments by All Members
- "mind-toxicating..refreshing and pulled together profoundly with pieces of piqued perpetuation planted in seeds. yeah, i like this a lot."
Posted by Unknown on "expired mental rental" by Rafe
- "I'm not exactly sure why I took so fondly to this write.. perhaps it was the almost lighthearted approach.. anyways, it's great."
Posted by Unknown on "expired mental rental" by Rafe
- "Too cool. Something I've never really tried to get the grasp of but you nailed it. Sweet. ~Ship!"
Posted by Unknown on "a few haiku" by Rafe
- "absolutely gorgeous. i see and feel this beauty. you have a magical touch with words."
Posted by Unknown on "a few haiku" by Rafe
- "Well done, I must say.. the second haiku struck me as the most enchanting.. in a distanced sort of fashion.. thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "a few haiku" by Rafe
- "..in their seperate breaths of tongue, these seem to be quite symmetrical..I am not sure whether that was intentional, or if they were written as seperate visions.. but each one, alone and, then brought into circumspect together.. rather compelling."
Posted by Unknown on "a few haiku" by Rafe
- "impeccable flow, swirling word choice. this is undeniably fascinating in it's approach. welcome :) "
Posted by Unknown on "blood and steel" by Rafe
- "Unique approach/manipulation of language.. it is not only the words themselves, but that which is uttered in between the lines..smooth liquid wildfire..niiicely done."
Posted by Unknown on "blood and steel" by Rafe
