expired mental rental
By Rafe
i sit here, sucking bandwidth and eating godsmack.
i ponder, thinking that maybe i am a dung beetle.
that the world i live in is only the unwanted excrement of others.
formed in the image of normalcy.
the smell covered vaguely with the scent of burned hair and 10% off coupons
really, when coming to regard soemthing like this, who the hell does one
talk to?
looking around i see so many other beetles, living the life of "ehh, whateva".
worse is the thought that we are the highest form of life, shoveling other
peoplse crap with a smile because the customer is always right.
then i ponder, well, i got six legs, means i can put a gun in four, and
still run.
i am not smiling now, its all a smirk. planning, planning...would you like
to upgrade for 35 cents extra?...planning planning...
heat, warmth of epifany.
boom.
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Comments on "expired mental rental"
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On Thursday, December 15, 2016, sIo
(898) wrote:
Fantastic piece. Made me chuckle at the end. I love the imagery and point of view.
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On Thursday, December 15, 2016, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
Highly deserved POTD.
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On Thursday, February 25, 2016, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
An absolute cracker jack of a piece...Smokin.
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On Monday, March 6, 2006, Guillotine
(168) wrote:
cmon man! upgrade!
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A former member wrote:
Send in a postcard! *cries*
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A former member wrote:
*sniffle* Please?
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A former member wrote:
*shakes fist* i will hunt you down!! upgrade, damn you!
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A former member wrote:
mind-toxicating..refreshing and pulled together profoundly with pieces of piqued perpetuation planted in seeds. yeah, i like this a lot.
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A former member wrote:
I'm not exactly sure why I took so fondly to this write.. perhaps it was the almost lighthearted approach.. anyways, it's great.
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A former member wrote:
You better fuckin' upgrade, mister. *tries to be threatening*
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On Saturday, January 21, 2006, Doc
(143) wrote:
Not much into consumerism eh? Doc
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On Friday, January 20, 2006, AHHH
(184) wrote:
nice.
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A former member wrote:
amazing, although random, amazing.
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On Friday, January 20, 2006, whisperer
(166) wrote:
oh definately nice....thumbs up