expired mental rental

By Rafe

i sit here, sucking bandwidth and eating godsmack.
i ponder, thinking that maybe i am a dung beetle.
that the world i live in is only the unwanted excrement of others.
formed in the image of normalcy.
the smell covered vaguely with the scent of burned hair and 10% off coupons

really, when coming to regard soemthing like this, who the hell does one talk to?
looking around i see so many other beetles, living the life of "ehh, whateva".

worse is the thought that we are the highest form of life, shoveling other peoplse crap with a smile because the customer is always right.

then i ponder, well, i got six legs, means i can put a gun in four, and still run.

i am not smiling now, its all a smirk. planning, planning...would you like to upgrade for 35 cents extra?...planning planning...

heat, warmth of epifany.

boom.

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© 2006 Rafe
Published on Friday, January 20, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • sIo On Thursday, December 15, 2016, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    Fantastic piece. Made me chuckle at the end. I love the imagery and point of view.

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, December 15, 2016, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Highly deserved POTD.

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, February 25, 2016, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    An absolute cracker jack of a piece...Smokin.

  • Guillotine On Monday, March 6, 2006, Guillotine (168)By person wrote:

    cmon man! upgrade!

  • A former member wrote: Send in a postcard! *cries*

  • A former member wrote: *sniffle* Please?

  • A former member wrote: *shakes fist* i will hunt you down!! upgrade, damn you!

  • A former member wrote: mind-toxicating..refreshing and pulled together profoundly with pieces of piqued perpetuation planted in seeds. yeah, i like this a lot.

  • A former member wrote: I'm not exactly sure why I took so fondly to this write.. perhaps it was the almost lighthearted approach.. anyways, it's great.

  • A former member wrote: You better fuckin' upgrade, mister. *tries to be threatening*

  • Doc On Saturday, January 21, 2006, Doc (143)By person wrote:

    Not much into consumerism eh? Doc

  • AHHH On Friday, January 20, 2006, AHHH (184)By person wrote:

    nice.

  • A former member wrote: amazing, although random, amazing.

  • whisperer On Friday, January 20, 2006, whisperer (166)By person wrote:

    oh definately nice....thumbs up

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