a few haiku

By Rafe

the open ocean

peace amidst the foaming waves

happiness under sail

~

turbulence above

held up by a black silk wing

clouds as stepping stones

~

art as fired clay

potters wheel the implement

thought turns into real

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© 2006 Rafe
Published on Friday, January 20, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Thursday, February 25, 2016, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Still amazing..

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, September 7, 2014, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    A wonderful trio of haikus with great depth beyond their 51 syllables.

  • whisperer On Friday, January 27, 2006, whisperer (166)By person wrote:

    sounds like a prayer....one i hope fervently to be answered

  • A former member wrote: Too cool. Something I've never really tried to get the grasp of but you nailed it. Sweet. ~Ship!

  • A former member wrote: absolutely gorgeous. i see and feel this beauty. you have a magical touch with words.

  • A former member wrote: ..in their seperate breaths of tongue, these seem to be quite symmetrical..I am not sure whether that was intentional, or if they were written as seperate visions.. but each one, alone and, then brought into circumspect together.. rather compelling.

  • A former member wrote: Well done, I must say.. the second haiku struck me as the most enchanting.. in a distanced sort of fashion.. thank you.

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