Comments by All Members
- "I absolutely adore this piece, and as soon as I get my ducats rolling, it's a new favorite. "Starclad and Skybound." I found that heavy with opposites. "Skyclad and starbound" - would have meant naked, in the natural sense, starbound is for forever. Or maybe it still means that. I still love to wonder. "
Posted by Unknown on "Longing" by Guillotine
- "this was powerfully and beautifully shattering, minimally expressed with maximal impact...well written. -=*AK*=-"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Longing" by Guillotine
- "Wow, that was actually intense... You should submit for the contest if you haven't already. This is a beautiful piece - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Longing" by Guillotine
- "a dreamlike write...i don't know why this made me stop "Unharmed but unknown"...it says a lot, and i need to think about it...thank you, this was great :)"
Posted by DarkBlueClearWater on "Unfathomed" by Guillotine
- "good to see you 'round again ... well wrought piece as ever, particularly the central stanza... thanks :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Unfathomed" by Guillotine
- "You have an unusual arsenal in your vocabulary and you mix an aged feel with a fresh and biting feel. Its really amazing. Refreshing. Love it"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Pray For Me" by Guillotine
- "i like your style...the flow was so smooth and easy, even thought the subject was a little sad, and deep.
welcome to dp, and thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "Unfathomed" by Guillotine
- "The second stanza was...beautiful and achingly sad to me. You write such elegant metaphors soft and lovely into such striking but painful poems. This is what poetry should be, its this kind of work I strive to make myself."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Unfathomed" by Guillotine
- "Oh wow, my first time reading you and I am impressed. Anybody who can work jackal into a poem rocks in my book. Just my thing. :)"
Posted by GhettoZombie on "Pray For Me" by Guillotine
- "once i say it again, i love your style when it comes to poetry.. great write (:"
Posted by Star on "Unfathomed" by Guillotine
- "I love this part "A dream was killed here;
A finality in monochrome orchestra
A mute plea, a silent word
Cracks out and opens this magnificent dawn
To spill forth its secrets
Into the dark waves beneath;
We’ll dive for conches
And listen to the earth die." Beautifully composed. P.S Wicked username you have there. "
Posted by Symbol on "Unfathomed" by Guillotine
- "Wow, glad you came back, I'd never have found you otherwise. I love reading deep philosophical poetry. " A psychosomatic trigger;
Pulled by the metaphysical
Fingers in my head; " - brilliant - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Pray For Me" by Guillotine
- "Sometimes in our lives there will be a moment of utter confusion to "whom" we are, our purpose, "what" we are... etc... eventually the confusion will disappear just don't get swallowed up by it too much ;) I really liked this piece for it's beautiful usage of words and the creativity of this line "I play my symphonies on skeleton keys" Cheers ♥"
Posted by Symbol on "Pray For Me" by Guillotine
- "wow beautiful again! your writing is like from the olden days.. i love this one as well.. well done! (: "
Posted by Star on "Midnight Garden" by Guillotine
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