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  • "This brings backs memories of a lost one to me. . .I'm going to have to sit and ponder this. . ."
    Posted by Unknown on "Mute" by Err0r
  • "This reminds me of make-up, and how some of my friends felt naked without wearing tons of it. They'd say it was as if they went into the day without their mask..."
    Posted by Mistress Shadow on "Paper Mask//Mirrored Lies" by Err0r
  • "my god...."Because sometimes/I need to see with my heart/And Love With My Lips"...and those last 5 lines...god, you took me into your world with this, and left me bleeding all the lies I've been covering up myself lately. Excellent lovely. ~*Beth*~"
    Posted by Unknown on "Paper Mask//Mirrored Lies" by Err0r
  • "you shouldn't learn to love any other face than your own...it will be there for the rest of your life...don't damage the house you were given as a gift or the little girl inside..."
    Posted by sIo on "Paper Mask//Mirrored Lies" by Err0r
  • "thats harsh. i think you're making the mask so horrific and i don't think the appearance beneath it even graces the level of ugliness you may look at as your mask every day...."
    Posted by sIo on "Paper Mask//Mirrored Lies" by Err0r
  • "Wow, ErrOr I really like this, reminds me of an old poem I wrote. . .The simplistic descriptions of the mask my imagination just run on what your mask would look like. . .I quite enjoyed it ^.^"
    Posted by Unknown on "Paper Mask//Mirrored Lies" by Err0r
  • "Damn, this is good. I like end. I also like eyes sewn shut, and mouths torn open, so I may be biased. Kick ass write though."
    Posted by Unknown on "Paper Mask//Mirrored Lies" by Err0r
  • "oh yes!! This is more like it....the words seem to convince beyond their liteal meaning...delving into slightly more surreal morphing context...I like this piece very muchski...:)"
    Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Mute" by Err0r
  • "Its a beautiful tribute. Wish i could do as well. Yes I am sentimental for a guy :)"
    Posted by Unknown on "A Mother's Wish" by Err0r
  • "Beautiful, you words are sweet and meaning is dead on. I am not close to my mother, but I am there when she needs me to be. ~T"
    Posted by Mistress Shadow on "A Mother's Wish" by Err0r
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