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A Mother's Wish
By Err0r
When you took one step
I'd take two.
Because I needed to go farther
Than you.
And if you sang softly,
I'd sing louder
Because I needed to be heard more
Than you.
And If you cried when you were lonely
I'd tough it out
Because I needed to be stronger
Than You.
And if you were attacked
I'd take the hits
Because I needed to protect better
Than you.
And If you reflected In A mirror
I'd shy away...
Because when I looked at you
I saw me.
And when I have kids mom...
I'll wish for the same thing too
That my child succeed better than me
Just Like I Did
For You
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© 2007 Err0r
Published on Friday, June 29, 2007.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "A Mother's Wish"
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On Tuesday, July 10, 2007, veingo
(533)
wrote:
This is just right. Thanks for sharing it. ^V^
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A former member wrote:
Oh man.. this one was like walking into a brick wall for me. It woke me up. Wow. Thank you. Great write!
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A former member wrote:
Its a beautiful tribute. Wish i could do as well. Yes I am sentimental for a guy :)
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On Tuesday, July 3, 2007, Mistress Shadow
(252) wrote:
Beautiful, you words are sweet and meaning is dead on. I am not close to my mother, but I am there when she needs me to be. ~T
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A former member wrote:
my mother and I are close. when u have that bond its really great to know u dont take it for granted. great write.
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On Friday, June 29, 2007, Preacher X
(35) wrote:
Well written, well said, and amazingly touching. The kind of thing moms would want for mothers day I would bet. :) Congratulations on a wonderful write.
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On Friday, June 29, 2007, dark_mistress
(19) wrote:
That was heartfelt and well written
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On Friday, June 29, 2007, Lady Grinning Soul
(145) wrote:
I second Beth.... this was amazing, and every word was heartfelt. okay, i feel stupid because i have nothing else to say....
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A former member wrote:
This was really sweet =] Heartfelt. I bet if she read it, she'd love it =]
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A former member wrote:
oh...wow...honey...every word...every line...good GOD...the very things all mothers wish for their children...and my, have you spoken these wishes gorgeously. I love this. And you. ~*Beth*~
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