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Mute
By Err0r
Muzzled Boy.
Gagged Girl.
Close-mouthed love.
Five Stitched Heart.
Unspoken Words.
Soundless Meaning.
Hushed Inspiration.
Sedated Tears.
Muffled Thoughts.
Unexpressed Truths.
Silenced Voices,
Quieter Blades.
Open
....Shut
........Wound
So we can all bleed on mute.
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© 2007 Err0r
Published on Thursday, June 21, 2007.
Filed under: "Philosophical" and
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Reefer_rave
(146)
wrote:
It reminds me of halloween too... hushed tones and wary faces. Gives me something to think about the rest of the night (at least).
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A former member wrote:
This brings backs memories of a lost one to me. . .I'm going to have to sit and ponder this. . .
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A former member wrote:
"So we can all bleed on mute" .......words my heart has been crying out with laryngitis to say and you put a voice to them...thank you.
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On Saturday, June 23, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
this brings out the exact nature of people, perfectly done.
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On Friday, June 22, 2007, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Short and sweet. I like it lots
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A former member wrote:
"So we can all bleed on mute."
...just f'n amazing.
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On Thursday, June 21, 2007, mywristshurt
(408) wrote:
i agree with everyone, it was very well written
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On Thursday, June 21, 2007, blue
(1454) wrote:
ha! Fantastic. So great. ~b
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On Thursday, June 21, 2007, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
Fuck.
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On Thursday, June 21, 2007, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
Hahaha, some clarification for the confused Britt. I meant "fuck"...as in..."fuck! That's fantastico!" Bravo! Yeehaw! Word.
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A former member wrote:
"So we cal all bleed on mute." I lubb every line...sooooo amazingly beautiful, the silence of bleeding and truths never said. *sighs* Excellentness, lovely. ~*Beth*~
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On Thursday, June 21, 2007, veingo
(533) wrote:
:)- ^V^
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On Thursday, June 21, 2007, MESUN
(230) wrote:
beautiful work here, it rings of a true depiction of life, yet it sticks to reality and masks it with silence.
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A former member wrote:
i like this one...gives a lot of meaning without the whole lot of writing..awesome..and the orange letters reminded me of halloween..lol.
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On Thursday, June 21, 2007, elisa
(1616) wrote:
exhaling sound... faintly leaving lips ..........the inevitable implosion.... loved it.
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