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"..fuck..*has no words*..that's a new take on peace. "
Posted by Unknown on "Everyone gets these few minutes of peace...in the bathroom." by Possesion

".. damnit all, girl. Wow. I'll come back after I finish gagging on my tongue."
Posted by Elegant Kiss on "Everyone gets these few minutes of peace...in the bathroom." by Possesion

"ohh this was very good,alot of color usage here,alot of good images,very descriptive..I felt like i was in the middle of every setting you created."
Posted by redtearswhitesnow on "The breath of my failing walls echo with care, dont move me." by Possesion

"and this amazed the shit out of me."
Posted by AHHH on "Addiction scares the shit out of me." by Possesion

"puh..puh..powerful! You've an intelligent style of writing for one so young.. my compliments to you. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Incinerate|Glory" by Possesion

"*sways to the unheard rhythm of your words* You've left me grasping at the straws of my sanity once again dear..."eyes, portals to my demise" If only the eyes could hide our emotions...Beautiful write. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "The breath of my failing walls echo with care, dont move me." by Possesion

"..structured decline..*sigh*..this was delicate, but just subtle enough to be fucking intense..almost like a well-strung nightmare..those are the best kind..that leave you with yourself.."
Posted by Unknown on "The breath of my failing walls echo with care, dont move me." by Possesion

"..mm..your fury is something I find myself sputtering and choking on..I could identify with that last line, so very much..christ, lady."
Posted by Unknown on "P.O.S Sideline Kick." by Possesion

"I too enjoyed this very much. the wordings were thoughtful and well chosen, I liked the intro/outro touch too.. all around good work. ~b"
Posted by blue on "The breath of my failing walls echo with care, dont move me." by Possesion

"Glad to suitably impress, dear Bard. "
Posted by Possesion on "The breath of my failing walls echo with care, dont move me." by Possesion

"awesome... you really built this well - to the climax of our fated eyes: orbs of grim realisation. I am suitably impressed. "
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "The breath of my failing walls echo with care, dont move me." by Possesion

"this is intensely captivating...bound with a creativity that envelopes my skin in shivers...completely ..."
Posted by AniDayz on "The breath of my failing walls echo with care, dont move me." by Possesion

"wow, i wish i had that kind of will power. good write. i dig."
Posted by toy soldier on "Incinerate|Glory" by Possesion

"This is really well done, i like how it flows, and the words don't let you go until your done."
Posted by MidSummers Eve on "P.O.S Sideline Kick." by Possesion

"it sends chills down my spine, and makes me shiver with horrified delight."
Posted by MidSummers Eve on "Rip ripe innocence. bleed to flow. rape to sow. Punish justly." by Possesion

"if you want space i have plenty of room on mine... as for the poem. have you ever concidered moving the side line back? so if they want to "gawk" they have to actually be closer to you? love the whole hatred feel to this though."
Posted by serotonin lost on "P.O.S Sideline Kick." by Possesion

"even thought i have dreams of flying be fore and being free.....tiss makes me want to jup right now and fly away..."
Posted by LiP Stiches on ".end" by Possesion

"Theres nothing I can say that hasn't already been said, but it's a very nice write. "
Posted by Err0r on "P.O.S Sideline Kick." by Possesion

"I'm sorry Bard, that you actually missed what i was saying...and only caught the DP line. "
Posted by Possesion on "P.O.S Sideline Kick." by Possesion

"*from bottom* Spurred on my anger at having to watch everyone else from across the way...If you get what im saying bardy. "
Posted by Possesion on "P.O.S Sideline Kick." by Possesion

"*..that way, i like fading to the background, it's just my way, infact on DP i'm making a few, quiet, friendships. So i hardly feel the bitter realisation. Though i went to post a poem (the beginnings of this one) to find i was out of space. that just spu"
Posted by Possesion on "P.O.S Sideline Kick." by Possesion

"Actually, the feelings weren't spurred by DP at all, i was just in a reaaaally pissed mood over getting ripped off by a friend over some shoplifted items. . I Think though that that initial high feeling of welcoma is long passed, and i rather prefer it th"
Posted by Possesion on "P.O.S Sideline Kick." by Possesion

"I heart you bard."
Posted by redtearswhitesnow on "P.O.S Sideline Kick." by Possesion

"...i realise that this rant has not helped matters and i apologise for it."
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "P.O.S Sideline Kick." by Possesion

"...and then you run out of Fucking Space, forcing you to either: a) delete existing poems that new-found friends commented on. b) upgrade your account and don't eat for a few weeks. c) stop posting due to the inherent suckiness of options a&b"
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "P.O.S Sideline Kick." by Possesion

"...a somewhat bitter realisation kicks in that a lot of people here don't know or care about you (except in wanting you to read their stuff)..."
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "P.O.S Sideline Kick." by Possesion

"i think that most DP members experience these emotions at some stage. You're coming down off the initial high of feeling welcomed and new... "
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "P.O.S Sideline Kick." by Possesion

"i think the graphic imagery was totally necessary and effective in showing how angry and destroyed you are about this. I like when a piece bleeds with emotion. "
Posted by girlafraid on "Rip ripe innocence. bleed to flow. rape to sow. Punish justly." by Possesion

"I see we have had anatomy class"
Posted by Doc on "Rip ripe innocence. bleed to flow. rape to sow. Punish justly." by Possesion

"fantastic work, shay! =) this was engrossing and visceral and good breaks of stanzas to add to its acerbic feel. sinister enticing images flow within my brain...excellent! ~michelle"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Rip ripe innocence. bleed to flow. rape to sow. Punish justly." by Possesion

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