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By Possesion


Beginning.
Finally, Someplace to breath.
Where wings can spread to soar,
And there is no longer that sick lingering..
Fear of heartache.

Middle.
Things aren't as cozy as before,
But the love is still fresh,
Still bruised, battered, abused.
And there is alot less flight,
No longer soaring but I Haven't fallen yet.
Fear of heartache, The knowledge it's coming my way.

End.
The place once called a sanctuary
(Sanctuary of our love)
Where winged angels could go free one more
(Now if you spread your wings you get burned)
I fell too hard too fast.
(The abusing comfort of your control)
Fear of heartache,
Hitting me,
Like a Sledgehammer
RIGHT IN THE CHEST.



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Copyright 2005 Shay Holland
Published on Saturday, September 3, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • LiP Stiches On Thursday, September 29, 2005, LiP Stiches (42)By person wrote:

    even thought i have dreams of flying be fore and being free.....tiss makes me want to jup right now and fly away...

  • MidSummers Eve On Tuesday, September 13, 2005, MidSummers Eve (38)By person wrote:

    Somehow mellower then previous work but still brilliant

  • DoctorAsh On Saturday, September 3, 2005, DoctorAsh (371)By person wrote:

    Beautiful write, perfectly written.

  • A former member wrote: Wonderful write. Your title says "Needs Work", but in my opinion, this is great the way it is. There are so many lines in here that stole my breath away, I can't even list just one. Awesome job-I can relate (perhaps a little too well...) *Evangel*

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