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"Wow. I love the way it's written. Very nice."
Posted by Thorn on "Confined to the cell of my thoughts" by Possesion

"grrr.. damn, that just cut right through me.. some interesting lines you've woven here. Altogether affecting. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Whore" by Possesion

"hard to think of a title for something that seams to change emotion. either way i liked it!"
Posted by serotonin lost on "Untitled[Don't .ask. Me]" by Possesion

"Not so much conservative old fashioned clothes, it just pisses me off to see children running around in shit that barely covers anything. It's not old fashioned dear, it's just what I consider decency."
Posted by Six-Out on "Excerpts From a Victim. Part. 1" by Possesion

"[cont.] when you grow up and have kids six i'd like to see you keep your teenaged daughters in conservative old-fashioned clothes. my initial comment was exactly that. pfft."
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Excerpts From a Victim. Part. 1" by Possesion

"[to below] you have a point with getting drunk but no i don't have a problem with a 14 year old dressed scantily at a party because they do that these days, it's called being a 'teenager.'"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Excerpts From a Victim. Part. 1" by Possesion

"You don't see a problem with a 14 year old being dressed scantily, and drunk at a party?"
Posted by Six-Out on "Excerpts From a Victim. Part. 1" by Possesion

"You have a point ^_^"
Posted by Possesion on "Excerpts From a Victim. Part. 1" by Possesion

"besides, you were at a party...unless there's some hidden stupid logic to dress like a 'dag.' yeah..."
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Excerpts From a Victim. Part. 1" by Possesion

"it doesn't matter what your wearing, or where you are. I've found that out from the support groups I've been shoved into."
Posted by Possesion on "Excerpts From a Victim. Part. 1" by Possesion

"Thanks for actually getting that, I personally think Yeah, Maybe my style of dress could be wrong, But that doesn't give anyone the right to hurt me. Glad to hear you got away okay on a date with a loser, date rapes are horrible... Rape is wide-spread and"
Posted by Possesion on "Excerpts From a Victim. Part. 1" by Possesion

"luckily he never got far, i was strong enought to fend him off. despite the fact the responses seem to blame you for your clothes, there is no excuse for any guy to rape a woman or vice versa for that matter."
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Excerpts From a Victim. Part. 1" by Possesion

"oh my, this is the worst thing that could happen to anybody....i felt this so bad =( i sympathise with you. i've met a low-life similar to them in a date."
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Excerpts From a Victim. Part. 1" by Possesion

"this was cool ... your ceaseless stream without a breath was a nice touch in making this a " run through" as well as a read through ... dug the freedom you write with .... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Hell Hounds" by Possesion

"Who would want a God that changed things because we made stupid decisions?"
Posted by Six-Out on "Excerpts From a Victim. Part. 1" by Possesion

"Point well taken."
Posted by Possesion on "Excerpts From a Victim. Part. 1" by Possesion

"i've already lost hope in my fathers God."
Posted by Possesion on "Excerpts From a Victim. Part. 1" by Possesion

"That if you weren't drunk at a party, and wearing skimpy clothes walking down a dark highway at night, that this wouldn't happen?"
Posted by Six-Out on "Excerpts From a Victim. Part. 1" by Possesion

"so should these boys, all of them. how's your faith? because if there is a god then he aloud this happen. maybe you should re-concider your beliefs."
Posted by serotonin lost on "Excerpts From a Victim. Part. 1" by Possesion

"I agree. But what can I say. "
Posted by Possesion on "Excerpts From a Victim. Part. 1" by Possesion

"So...you were drunk at a party, wearing skimpy clothes, and are only 14? Your parents should be shot."
Posted by Six-Out on "Excerpts From a Victim. Part. 1" by Possesion

"Damn this had the right feel to it.. Been waiting some time for something like this (You) to feats my eyes upon"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Search Lights" by Possesion

"slightly biographical. but not Oh So entirely. I took past lines of a murderous whore whom I love and made us this highly enjoyable write. got a big lashing out from my friend J.T though. =("
Posted by Possesion on "Whore" by Possesion

"i liked the scatter of it... chaos and pain... i've been experimenting with this lately too... sometimes a clouded meaning means more! There was some really shattering imagery in here... hope things get better ;)"
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "Whore" by Possesion

"A chilling description of an often-chilling profession... I certainly hope this isn't biographical! Many intense lines... a couple were a little unclear, but for the most part, they were sharp and clear as diamond."
Posted by stormtalk on "Whore" by Possesion

"there is a monster in us all."
Posted by bloody LOVEly on "Whore" by Possesion

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