Comments by All Members
- "Heh I dated a girl like this. All I can say is I don't have much tolerance, my bullshit meter tops off almost instantly so she had to go. Sad that people act like this but what can you do. ~Ship!"
Posted by Unknown on "Scare Me Senseless, Then Hold Me Tight" by l mo
- "edit this and erase the second line, it was getting too long. then you should re-word, replace shall with choke, tell with on, you with big, no with fat, and lies with dicks. "
Posted by Unknown on "To Ryan D. [A Couplet]" by l mo
- "part 2? I wasn't planning on writing a part 2, but now I think I will, just for you!"
Posted by l mo on "Mercenary" by l mo
- "nice, it's sad to read some alot of the comments left on poems like these, it's sad to hear that anybody can relate or that anyone has gone through this, life is a bitch i hope all the real evil doers go to hell"
Posted by Unknown on "Hurt" by l mo
- "thanks, guys. And this isnt based on my life. I actually got the inspiration to write it from a story I read online, but I twisted the plot a bit. In the story it was the dad who was the villian, and the mom the dead protector."
Posted by l mo on "Hurt" by l mo
- "hmm, i think this is emotionally raw i like how you've tied the noose in the end. great work."
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Hurt" by l mo
- "lol. not bad. with more patience and work this could've been a longer rhyming story about a hunter hunted situation with more gore and surprises. "
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "Mercenary" by l mo
- "it's so sad. i can related to what you say, it's very good!"
Posted by Unknown on "Hurt" by l mo
- "wow this is soooo sad...i just dont understand how anybody could do that shit.nice write tho"
Posted by Just a Rose on "Hurt" by l mo
- "this is really touching.....and i hope its not true.....good write....."
Posted by Unknown on "Hurt" by l mo
