Comments by All Members
- "Short yet powerful. Sometimes less is more, and this is a great example of that. Your message is expressed perfectly and needs nothing more or less. Excellent job!"
Posted by Unknown on "Picture of you and me" by aCiD aNgEL
- "sometimes people don't hear what we are trying to tell them, and leave us with no choice but to act, in order for the message to get across.
good job, very clear message sent."
Posted by natalie on "Picture of you and me" by aCiD aNgEL
- "i never knew what words to say. i read it alot. it is one of my favorites yet i never knew what to say, so ill say this, i love it"
Posted by Unknown on "Discount Love" by aCiD aNgEL
- "i was excited to see that you wrote something new! =) and yeah i love thisss very powerful read. its like w.h.o.a."
Posted by mysterylove on "Discount Love" by aCiD aNgEL
- "short,simple and blunt! I liked how it punches you in the face with the message.The rhyming was cool.."discount love"-it was so fitting..Thanks for the read.
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Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Discount Love" by aCiD aNgEL
- "Very cool, a great write... I had a bit of a problem with flow... and only because you cram words together with no commas... last line between 'you' and 'for'... it will help the reader a lot.. I like your poem, write on...."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Discount Love" by aCiD aNgEL
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