Comments by All Members
- "Very true. You broke down some concepts that seem very large to their simplest of forms. The last two lines drove the message home nicely. Nice job :p"
Posted by Dilated View on "Life" by MidSummers Eve
- "Good rhyme and flow but alittle too uplifting, But good all the while. Some lines get you thinking "Yeah maybe i should" Or something like that.."
Posted by Possesion on "Lifes Lessons" by MidSummers Eve
- "i've always wanted to fly and when/if i'm still alive when i'm sixy or so i plan on jumping from a plane with nothing but my funeral suit on, aiming for my grave, i'd hate to die in bed as an invalid."
Posted by MidSummers Eve on "Dreams" by MidSummers Eve
- "you do realise that is just an expression made by people who despise smokers? smokers are great kissers - now that's the truth. hehe my own experience anyway."
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Its a lie i tell ya!" by MidSummers Eve
- "Well thought and put together, I love the way you took something simple like jumping to your death and intertwined something such as the wind in a poetic way It's very good."
Posted by Possesion on "Dreams" by MidSummers Eve
