Comments by All Members
- ""cut the sky in two" i like that but i think i like picturing the sky with wings more"
Posted by Mari on "The Stork" by Dark Galaxy
- "staccato here is a sure positive ... theres nothing more perfectly "stop action" ferocious as a cat clamping down ... theyre killing machines .. again , dig it .. funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Bird" by Dark Galaxy
- "Thanks funguy. I like your comments. I wasn't sure it reads too well - a little staccato."
Posted by Dark Galaxy on "Bird" by Dark Galaxy
- "this was a compacted crash of destiny .. a moment larger than itself , a glimpse of all things automatic ... super slick write ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Bird" by Dark Galaxy
- "To BlueSkiesDenied, thanx for the comments, when I know my way around here I'll return the favour. Ta"
Posted by Dark Galaxy on "Seppuku" by Dark Galaxy
- "grrr.. this grabbed me as both hopeful and incisive.. wonderfully obscure. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Seppuku" by Dark Galaxy
