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Bird
By Dark Galaxy
starling caught by cat
nebulae trapped in feathers
dirt, feathers, claws
bird blazes with life
flickers then fades
the universe inhales
cat bristles larger than the earth
flicks its paws
the dead bird twitches
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Copyright 2005 Dark Galaxy
Published on Wednesday, September 7, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Bird"
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On Saturday, April 15, 2006, Equinox Asylum
(140)
wrote:
Wonderful short write. I always enjoy a great one.
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On Monday, September 26, 2005, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
snapshots in real life - excellent short piece
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On Wednesday, September 7, 2005, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
this was a compacted crash of destiny .. a moment larger than itself , a glimpse of all things automatic ... super slick write ... funguy
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On Thursday, September 8, 2005, Dark Galaxy
(2) wrote:
Thanks funguy. I like your comments. I wasn't sure it reads too well - a little staccato.
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On Thursday, September 8, 2005, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
staccato here is a sure positive ... theres nothing more perfectly "stop action" ferocious as a cat clamping down ... theyre killing machines .. again , dig it .. funguy
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