Seppuku

By Dark Galaxy

Faced with no alternative
the path of honour bares its teeth.
The secret movement of time filling
life’s blood with the steel of rain.

At the end of a line, nothing.
Nothing but the hollow promise of an act
soon to be forgotten.
The faint horizon beckons,
a choice between white sky and sea.
Snapping waves drawing whispers from
the sweet voice of clouds.

Destiny accepted. A conversation from beyond
a dark door is no longer meaningless.
In the clarity of deepest white, I wonder –
Who will be my second?


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Copyright 2005 Dark Galaxy
Published on Thursday, July 7, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Equinox Asylum On Saturday, April 15, 2006, Equinox Asylum (140)By person wrote:

    Wonderful imagery in this poignant write. Thanx for the read.

  • down-sx-ft On Thursday, July 7, 2005, down-sx-ft (46)By person wrote:

    nice write I love it! welcome to DP

  • Ablebody Peckawood On Thursday, July 7, 2005, Ablebody Peckawood (38)By person wrote:

    This is a good poem welcome to dp

  • Dark Galaxy On Thursday, July 7, 2005, Dark Galaxy (2)By person wrote:

    To BlueSkiesDenied, thanx for the comments, when I know my way around here I'll return the favour. Ta

  • blue On Thursday, July 7, 2005, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    grrr.. this grabbed me as both hopeful and incisive.. wonderfully obscure. ~b

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