Comments by All Members
- "exceptional little piece here... very pleasant turn for an ending... honest simple poetic bullseye ... cool man...funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Kiss V" by Thorn
- "This one's got a really neat abstract quality... go figure... I really like it, this one is all art"
Posted by Nail Bunny on "po[A]e[R]t[T]ry" by Thorn
- "I like the wit of the end, a flippant summary.....brother poet, although it started off tentatively it was nay half bad...at least you didn't degrade it with the word 'opine' or even worse rhyme about voices in her head/better off dead...."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "po[A]e[R]t[T]ry" by Thorn
- "......a poetic bookmark of an unpainted canvas.... -words- a primitive masterpiece....this is amazing."
Posted by elisa on "po[A]e[R]t[T]ry" by Thorn
- "hey there, been a while thought i would peek in and look around. the words hit hard in this, the cold rawness....good work ...."
Posted by thornyrose on "Frozen Rose Petals" by Thorn
- "now this was exquisite...im fumbling for a decent comment, those last lines left me with a smile, perhaps because i can identify so well with your description of her..truly lovely ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Sweet Mary" by Thorn
- ""Labels stick to her Like tape to the surface of a river"...this is the best simile i've read in a while!
great write! "
Posted by Unknown on "Sweet Mary" by Thorn
- "This was awesome, i really enjoyed the concept of the burdenless life this seemed to potray to me."
Posted by Unknown on "Sweet Mary" by Thorn
- "That 1st stanza was fuckin' superb and sucked me right into the rest of the piece. To me, this feels like a development in your poetic style - Long may it continue, dude!!"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Frozen Rose Petals" by Thorn
- "beautiful and breaking imagery at the same time....digging in with a grip cold and punishing yet without hammering .... well done"
Posted by NikesRain on "Frozen Rose Petals" by Thorn
- "I wrote this very spur-of-the-moment on a napkin during dinner on the worst day I've had in a long time."
Posted by Thorn on "Frozen Rose Petals" by Thorn
- "thorn, this poem beautiful. the imagery in the beginning great; the despair is there...i feel like u could have taken this poem further...but i feel like that with most of mine 2...write on, bro"
Posted by zanewill on "Frozen Rose Petals" by Thorn
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