Flowers & Bananas

By Rebel_Angel

The guidelines for this poem was told to me by a friend. I was to write a story about happy things; banana's and flower's.This is how it turned out??

Flowers are icky,
They're not cool,
I wanna drown then
In my pool,

Bananas are yummy in my tummy,
They are rapped up like mummies,
But it's ok cuz they are in my tummy,
Not the banana skin,
But the banana within,

This is the end of the banana story,
There where flowers,
But they were too glory,
We kicked them out,
They said buh bye,
And that is why
This poem was written by I.

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Copyright 2003 Rebel_Angel
Published on Sunday, April 20, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Anoblechicken On Monday, April 3, 2006, Anoblechicken (38)By person wrote:

    dude this is the dumbest most brilliant thing i've read all day, Happy Chickens!!!!!!!

  • Dancing_Monkey On Tuesday, December 23, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    fucking great... I LOVE BANANAS...

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Sunday, August 31, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (253)By person wrote:

    lol PURE GENIUS! Reminds me of some of my work. It's great to see some work like this at DP!

  • Diva_Satanica On Tuesday, August 12, 2003, Diva_Satanica (78)By person wrote:

    haha this is funny. i love it.-D.S

  • Abbyernathie On Saturday, August 9, 2003, Abbyernathie (61)By person wrote:

    i rember when u wrote this one! one of my fav's! yay!

  • A former member wrote: LOVED IT! marvelous write... I've read a couple others by you and didn't leave a comment, but they were good as well!! this one is cute!

  • ColdScaredAlone On Thursday, July 31, 2003, ColdScaredAlone (80)By person wrote:

    how creative! that was great.

  • _Andrew_ On Tuesday, July 15, 2003, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    all i have to say is........ LoL (me likes :)) ) *~*aNDReW*~*

  • The_Scavenger On Thursday, June 26, 2003, The_Scavenger (30)By person wrote:

    cute nae, I liked it.

  • manywalks On Saturday, June 14, 2003, manywalks (750)By person wrote:

    Lol, this was cute. ~ mw

  • diavolessa On Wednesday, May 7, 2003, diavolessa (208)By person wrote:

    funny, very funny! :)

  • A former member wrote: Haha....i liked it!!

  • Aurora_Light On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    haha hehe great Rebel i like

  • Bloodofdeadpoets On Sunday, April 20, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (55)By person wrote:

    very good, i find it very amusing and funny, thanks for sharing

  • A former member wrote: an off-kilter sort of poem. i enjoyed the change of pace

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