leaving understanding open

By just breath

It's Human nature
We make mistakes
anything can happen.

They Love their lives but just don't , Hmmm they just don't ....appreciate it

I need to be alone
I need to be alone tonight

As my soul inflames
feelings are uncontrollable
i'm swept into the wave
I'm swept up into the waves tonight

people who love me dear
knew the truth was hard to hear

But Truth was always spoken

"A reasonable solution"

Clouded feelings raged

A compromise no option,

Reason dissapears

An unrully Teen, 
The parents greatest fear

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Published on Thursday, March 15, 2007.     Filed under: "Rage" and
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  • Spiked Tongue On Thursday, March 15, 2007, Spiked Tongue (22)By person wrote:

    i know you can write, give it time and other people will see it too - Spiked Tongue

  • Spiked Tongue On Thursday, March 15, 2007, Spiked Tongue (22)By person wrote:

    wow, i actually think i get you here. I read your other works and i really wanted to know what was inside and what you were feelig, but the briefness makes that difficult.

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