Fisking Ouch!!

There is a small crunch.
Fire races under my skin.
Lights dim and fade out.
Blessed darknes approaches...
Then the fire returns.

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Published on Thursday, February 22, 2007. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Fisking Ouch!!"

A former member wrote: i must concure with stapled_lips... they are short, but truly amazing
On Thursday, April 5, 2007, prettydisgrace (93) wrote:

i like the way u express emotion...your work is truely a masterpeice! ;)
On Friday, February 23, 2007, GraveFlower (240) wrote:

i have noticed that most of your poetry is awefully short, yet i keep coming back for more,.....im very interested in your style of writing, you make suck great points..~*dani*~