TIME GOES ON

By prettydisgrace

i wish i could stop time
time goes on and on and on........
endlessly, never letting you put things right
not enough time to say what you needed
not enough time to do what they wanted
time goes on, its out of your hands
the handS on the clock keep going round and around
still not doing what needed to be done
time goes on.IT NEVER STOPS

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© 2007 bitter_sweet
Published on Saturday, February 17, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: What if time is an illusion

  • ANGELSLAYER On Tuesday, March 27, 2007, ANGELSLAYER (118)By person wrote:

    If only we could turn time back,one of the great tragedies of life.

  • A former member wrote: i dont think stoping time would be a good thing..just let time pass the faster the better.well that my opinion anyways..still an awsome write~Amanda~

  • A former member wrote: if only we could kill the clocks

  • prettydisgrace On Sunday, March 4, 2007, prettydisgrace (96)By person wrote:

    hehe damn time.

  • prettydisgrace On Sunday, March 4, 2007, prettydisgrace (96)By person wrote:

    Thank you again for the kind comments - all of you!

  • Mylissa On Wednesday, February 28, 2007, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    Time...what a topic. Outstanding.

  • unspeakable truth On Tuesday, February 27, 2007, unspeakable truth (100)By person wrote:

    no never stop time, just don't miss it, don't reget your time.... I liked this. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: iwish to stop it too :-) nice Scholar

  • A former member wrote: So true. Time really never does stop when you think about it Scholar

  • Tania On Sunday, February 18, 2007, Tania (197)By person wrote:

    i liked this.. :)

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