This galaxy that spins in motion is motionless to me.
By Armor for your life
“All I talk about is the past.
Like my lungs
Are flooded with ghosts.”
With dead tongues
And stars pumping through our veins.
We let the sky take hold of us.
[We were so close]
But you were shaking far too much.
“Don’t go”
I whispered softly
But you were already too far gone.
And I’m so far down
That I don’t think you can get to me.
The reflection in my eyes
Still holds the image
Of your final walk away from here.
[Beautiful curves becoming one with the horizon]
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© 2007 Armor for your life
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On Monday, March 31, 2008, Reefer_rave
(139) wrote:
sad and sweet, like a quiet sigh
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A former member wrote:
Awww. I agree with DyingAngel, and couldn't have said it better myself. -Marlena
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On Thursday, February 15, 2007, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
clean. well done.
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A former member wrote:
Erasing the memory of being left behind, as you watched in silence someone walk away...their backs to your gaze, disappearing in shadows and sunsets...*sigh* Excellent piece. ~*Beth*~
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On Thursday, February 15, 2007, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
This was the bollocks! Not a word was wasted and nothing was overstated...*faves* :)
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On Thursday, February 15, 2007, LOKI
(161) wrote:
all we have is our past.Amazing write though.I like the imagery you display in this.
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On Thursday, February 15, 2007, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
at times those curves can't be distinguished from sunsets... this was beautiful.