Drowning

By brokenbandagedbetter

Moonlight floods into my eyes
As I fall to my knees to hush the cries
Thoughts so hurtful that I drown inside
as the churning hatred will not subside
uncertainty seeps into this pitch black haze

Cut deep into the memory I cannot erase
my mind taunts me with this dreaded existence
the pain and bitterness I cannot shake
these thoughts they’re so persistent

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© 2007 brokenbandagedbetter
Published on Wednesday, February 7, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Memories can hurt, this poems a good read

  • BethanyBallet On Tuesday, April 1, 2008, BethanyBallet (21)By person wrote:

    I'm so glad your out of that predicament mommy. I love you and your dark side

  • Drea On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    I agree with Aunty. You did a good job with this. Welcome.

  • GraveFlower On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, GraveFlower (240)By person wrote:

    wow, ur pretty good........good write, welcome to dp ~*dani*~

  • brokenbandagedbetter On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, brokenbandagedbetter (29)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much for your kind words! I really appreciate you! Regina

  • Aunty Depressant On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, Aunty Depressant (423)By person wrote:

    So horrible to get stuck in those emotions, ...conveyed well. Welcome to DP.

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