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Drowning
By brokenbandagedbetter
Moonlight floods into my eyes
As I fall to my knees to hush the cries
Thoughts so hurtful that I drown inside
as the churning hatred will not subside
uncertainty seeps into this pitch black haze
Cut deep into the memory I cannot erase
my mind taunts me with this dreaded existence
the pain and bitterness I cannot shake
these thoughts they’re so persistent
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© 2007 brokenbandagedbetter
Published on Wednesday, February 7, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Drowning"
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A former member wrote:
Memories can hurt, this poems a good read
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On Tuesday, April 1, 2008, BethanyBallet
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wrote:
I'm so glad your out of that predicament mommy. I love you and your dark side
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On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, Drea
(1443) wrote:
I agree with Aunty. You did a good job with this. Welcome.
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On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, GraveFlower
(249) wrote:
wow, ur pretty good........good write, welcome to dp ~*dani*~
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On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, brokenbandagedbetter
(29) wrote:
Thank you so much for your kind words! I really appreciate you! Regina
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On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
So horrible to get stuck in those emotions, ...conveyed well. Welcome to DP.
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