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Good Bye
By Rebel_Angel
You torture me every day
It's like you enjoy it this way.
If only you could see
What you're doing to me.
All the promises you break
And the advice you never take.
You're so blind to me,
If only you could see.
Many thoughts run through my head
As I lie in bed.
Thinking of a way
To say
GOOD BYE
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Copyright 2003 Rebel_Angel
Published on Monday, April 14, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on " Good Bye"
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A former member wrote:
wow, this is really cool. i like this a lot
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A former member wrote:
Yes, say good bye but it won't help you if you won't be able to get up your ass to face the fact that you allow them to torture you. And something: why do you take promises that are ought to break?
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On Saturday, August 9, 2003, Abbyernathie
(61)
wrote:
sorry it cut me off. "assholes who make our lives hell..." is what it's supposed to say...
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On Saturday, August 9, 2003, Abbyernathie
(61) wrote:
i really like the way this poem captures all the shit u put up with every day and how u wish you could just make it stop and just stop caring, but it also shows how we can't choose who we like and don't like, and how we often like the assholes who make ou
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On Thursday, July 24, 2003, blackdarkness
(228) wrote:
i have felt this way so many times....Thank you for putting it into words...I love it
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A former member wrote:
all too clear. brilliant! =)
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On Tuesday, July 15, 2003, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
very to the point and very well concluded, well done *~*aNDReW*~*
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, celestine_moon
(46) wrote:
it sucks at first, but being alone is better than being with someone who makes you feel this way. sometimes you just gotta know when to say goodbye. i'm glad you've reached that point. good luck and nice write. -moon
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On Thursday, June 26, 2003, The_Scavenger
(30) wrote:
Nice write. full of emotions, both of hatred and of love. confusion also has its part. Excellent use of words. Keep it up
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On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, Sky Singer
(153) wrote:
very heartfelt, and i again understand your pain
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On Wednesday, April 16, 2003, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
Goodbye is just a way to say hello to life alone...
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On Wednesday, April 16, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
great i like sounds like me some days
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A former member wrote:
I realy liked this it was very good for real I feel the same way, so good job keep it up.
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A former member wrote:
say your goodbyes, and then find those worth saying hello to
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