Black Christmas
By Mathesix
It was held in a raincloud, this jilted facade
Teeming with the looks of a more popular crowd
The dancing minstrality of a harlequin rigidity
And eight glasses of eggnog
Laced with your favorite drink...
Cacauphony of colors you tasted abroad
The sweet poinsetta similes of a makeshift holiday shroud
Mistaken for candles you set them ablaze
Good wishes and cheers to us all
Or to the few faces you could decipher...
A farewell toast off-key in A Minor
A swirling of skirts in the hedonistic haze
Masochistic maze your municipal dissection
Of every rope we extend
-Playtime's over, stop pretending
That every eye is on you, and every word pertains
To ascertain you true intentions
And pick which boy you shall date-
Three daquiris past midnight and unaware
Of a charlatan happiness, numb to the pain
Drinking to forget the abject rejection
Wishing for a gunshot to end the trepidation
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Comments on "Black Christmas"
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On Tuesday, December 26, 2006, Mord
(35) wrote:
Neat. Was like watching an Alfred Hitchcock on a black and white tv. Very vivid. " Good evening...."
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On Thursday, December 21, 2006, Forgotten Angel
(309) wrote:
wow..you never fail to amaze me..this especially! this is just..wow..no words to describe it..its amazing! nd i agree w/ angel..all of it! -Kel
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On Thursday, December 21, 2006, alaskanamber
(64) wrote:
positively wonderful. i can't wait for more.
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On Thursday, December 21, 2006, verablue
(106) wrote:
i am intrigued...this is great! i will have to read more of you....
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On Thursday, December 21, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
This was stellar. Write on, man.