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Primal
By Tibi
Me woman
You wolf
Wood language we speak
Food language
Bone deep stone language- my mother tongue
Breathe
Breathe me
You beast
Me meat
Tongues speak lung language
Salt is just to say
I
You
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© 2006 Tibi
Published on Tuesday, November 21, 2006.
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Comments on "Primal"
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A former member wrote:
Too clever for 2008, the fossils feel pride, thought it was great..look fwd to more.
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On Tuesday, April 1, 2008, elisa
(1595)
wrote:
cut the fat ...and eat the meat from the bone. primordial indeed. i love it
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On Wednesday, March 26, 2008, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Just a stream of words. But like good poetry, That's all it takes. And I was right there with you. Surprised, and a little ashamed, that I haven't read you before. That I know of, anyway.
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On Wednesday, March 26, 2008, Niemand
(355) wrote:
This was cool..
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On Wednesday, September 5, 2007, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
This was madness. Like it =) -Carl
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On Tuesday, November 21, 2006, Aunty Depressant
(423) wrote:
years back...or beers too many? Hehehe
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A former member wrote:
Ha Ha Ha!!! I get that too, but, seriously speaking, I like how genuine this piece is. You cut out the superfaluous and make a very raw and comprehensable poem. ....-samone
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On Tuesday, November 21, 2006, Lady Grinning Soul
(143) wrote:
this was different..... a good different i might add and this reminded me of what maybe a cave man would speak. or earlier man in history. this was incredible to read!
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On Tuesday, November 21, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
Incredible talking about the stone age I think time just shifted on me and I've lost in the wilderness of cavemen, watching as they evolve in the life.. The more scary version of humanitys past I assume. Incredible all the same ~Gothic
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