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By Moratha

My fuzzy brain perceives a thought
Of world peace, without any loss
Then this thought starts to rot
My mind is still loading…please wait

Forgive my lack of propriety
I feel sucked into an inner death
As I break the rules of society
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All my thoughts come crashing down
Look into the eddy of nothing
Then my thoughts stir and come around
My mind is still loading…please wait

Random things invade my head
I push the deeper inside of me
Many suicides of things I dread
My mind is still loading…please wait

The pills make it better, but only stall the thoughts from hostile invasion of my heart.




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© 2006 Moratha
Published on Tuesday, October 3, 2006.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Alanarchy On Tuesday, October 3, 2006, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    Very cool. Loved the concept, and you pulled it off well.

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