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Sometimes/I need/I want
By Emma Lee
Sometimes I just want to scream until someone hears me.
Sometimes I just want to run away until no-one can find me.
Sometimes I wish I were dead then they couldn't find me.
Sometimes I wish the world would end and then we would be free.
I need to be away from this.
I need to be free from this.
I need to clear my head.
I need to you to put me to bed.
I want to scratch the eyes from my face.
I want to cut myself away with no trace.
I want to take you in every way.
I want you to dig my grave.
It all ends now......
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© 2006 Emma Lee
Published on Tuesday, September 26, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Sometimes/I need/I want"
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A former member wrote:
I really like the ending, how it's not entirely ended yet. It's really cool!
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A former member wrote:
very powerful, beautifully written, i know how you feel
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On Wednesday, September 27, 2006, carlosjackal
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wrote:
Great poem especially the lines, "Sometimes I wish the world would end and then we would be free/I need to be way from this/I need to be free from this," where the poem tries to make a turn for the better away from the darkness.
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On Wednesday, September 27, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
we're all driven by want and need....sometimes....instinct.... has it's way with us.
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On Wednesday, September 27, 2006, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
Very lyrical, I could hear this set to music.
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On Wednesday, September 27, 2006, Ocean of Truth
(43) wrote:
great way to show some of our most primal fears/wants... really compelling
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A former member wrote:
i really enjoyed this from you very dark well done
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