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Waiting For Their Return
By vaultgrl
It's gloomy outside...
It's worse in here.
The shrieking winds,
match my thoughts and tears
Tears that will never be seen...
Thoughts that will never be heard...
They float away,
at the end of the storm.
Leaving false pretenses,
of returning to a norm.
I remain,
subconciously awaiting their return.
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© 2006 vaultgrl
Published on Tuesday, May 9, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Waiting For Their Return"
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A former member wrote:
the abstraction of this idea is so haunting.. leaves me waiting for something too, without them, this world feels just empty, we are all somehow incomplete. great piece.
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On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, Dancing_Monkey
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wrote:
When I write I try never to use the same word more then once.. EVER! but this was like reading your mind. the imputs you got from the rain and then how you realy saw it.
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A former member wrote:
This is absolutely splendid my dear. You are getting better and better by the post. Keep it up. ~Lost~
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On Tuesday, May 9, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
That was so full of sorrow and pain. At the same time I felt a bit of hope peering through. Great job!! Julia~
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On Tuesday, May 9, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
Aww this was just hurting me so badly, *huggles*
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