He paints his masterpiece[with slivers of her shattered tongue]

By redtearswhitesnow

I would throw
a sigh at her words
to feel them crack
along my anemic fingers.

Picking up the pieces
and painting perfection
along the roof of my mouth.

To place all of this
along a lethargic breath
and with it
serenade the stars.

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© 2006 redtearswhitesnow
Published on Wednesday, April 12, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Jonas On Friday, February 1, 2013, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    beautifully crafted words that, in my interpretation, illustrate something illusive but real

  • A former member wrote: can't function after reading this, leaves me dizzy, im a good way. ^_^

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Tuesday, April 18, 2006, TheBardOfBlasphemy (357)By person wrote:

    This was wheezy, like the croak of breath coming from lungs more cancer than flesh. It was desperate, like jumping off the edge of the world to catch the sun.

  • elisa On Saturday, April 15, 2006, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    words lost between a dream and reality......leaves me completely breathless

  • urbanhumility On Saturday, April 15, 2006, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    fucking brilliant! damn! well done urban.......

  • A former member wrote: like june said, i loved that second stanza..although this entire poem was a brief painting, beautiful and vivid. great write. ~bethany

  • A former member wrote: wow .. the second stanza, especially.. wow.. you are so beautifully disarrayed in this.. and it is tragic how lovely you place sorrow.. silver-lined.. as if it were to light your sky as a strangled moon.. ~ tripping inside your mind

  • The Crimson Queen On Wednesday, April 12, 2006, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    You words just pound against my head, perfection. I loved this.

  • AniDayz On Wednesday, April 12, 2006, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    potent. i've missed your words.

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