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He paints his masterpiece[with slivers of her shattered tongue]
By redtearswhitesnow
I would throw
a sigh at her words
to feel them crack
along my anemic fingers.
Picking up the pieces
and painting perfection
along the roof of my mouth.
To place all of this
along a lethargic breath
and with it
serenade the stars.
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© 2006 redtearswhitesnow
Published on Wednesday, April 12, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, February 1, 2013, Jonas
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wrote:
beautifully crafted words that, in my interpretation, illustrate something illusive but real
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A former member wrote:
can't function after reading this, leaves me dizzy, im a good way. ^_^
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On Tuesday, April 18, 2006, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(358) wrote:
This was wheezy, like the croak of breath coming from lungs more cancer than flesh. It was desperate, like jumping off the edge of the world to catch the sun.
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On Saturday, April 15, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
words lost between a dream and reality......leaves me completely breathless
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On Saturday, April 15, 2006, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
fucking brilliant! damn! well done urban.......
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A former member wrote:
like june said, i loved that second stanza..although this entire poem was a brief painting, beautiful and vivid. great write. ~bethany
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A former member wrote:
wow .. the second stanza, especially.. wow.. you are so beautifully disarrayed in this.. and it is tragic how lovely you place sorrow.. silver-lined.. as if it were to light your sky as a strangled moon.. ~ tripping inside your mind
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On Wednesday, April 12, 2006, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
You words just pound against my head, perfection. I loved this.
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On Wednesday, April 12, 2006, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
potent. i've missed your words.
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