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"abstraction"
By PoeticHellion
filled with misconceptions,
i am here.
i am there.
solidity,
evades me.
connect, connect con--
separate.
spacialize.
[e]Xist
SMOKE rises,
i am here, there,
no where, everywhere.
(jumbled) mass of misconceptions
you are me.
i am you.
falling through the cracks.
nothing even... connects.
i am.
i am not.
search.search.search
lose.find.
begin.end.
peace.war.
opposites attract,
abstracts detract.
iamyou.
youareme.
weare
wearenot...
endendend.
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© 2006 PoeticHellion
Published on Monday, April 10, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on ""abstraction""
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A former member wrote:
love the tendriled effect with visuals. .. matches the ambience of voice and image; of perfect bl.ending.
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On Friday, May 19, 2006, AniDayz
(820)
wrote:
amasing creation of fukking fantastical.insight, this is so wonderful with an intensity that is fabulously enticing, this speaks with such depth and shatters the realm of 'everyday existence.' muchly appreciated.
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On Friday, April 28, 2006, Nail Bunny
(161) wrote:
Wow... Jill... you've outdone yourself. this is... breathtaking.
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A former member wrote:
I cannot believe I missed this before now.. immaculatly thread(ed) together..reads in skips, almost.. I am so beautifully wound within this..
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On Monday, April 10, 2006, Thorn
(283) wrote:
I love it. Although, truth be told, I liked it better the way it was laid out on paper. But, having lost it's artistic presentation, it has lost none of its poetic spirit.
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On Monday, April 10, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
Great poem my dear I loved it, it swollowed me whole
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