River Gulls

By johntaiyu



These birds
swarm over this one section
of the old river
pretty much
throughout the day.

They feed
on the small fish
that live just beyond
the shallows
where the railroad bridge
crosses over.

I have no idea
what kind of birds they are
but they look like seagulls
which is weird,
since this is Iowa.

The river itself
is characteristically
ugly
in these parts.

It smells of cow manure
and farm runoff
and though some people still
eat the fish
out of it,
I wouldn't advise
such an endeaver.

The community ignores the river,
by putting up cheap prefab buildings
with their backs to the water,
and filling the banks
with tires and waste.

Every few years
a drunken undergraduate
falls off one of the bridges
and drowns at the roller dam,
but other than that,
we don't even think about
this thing
that flows through
the heart of town.

The gulls, however,
know better,
feasting as they do,
on its bounty,

in essence
serving as an open-air
extension
of the river's mass.

All the while
not noticing
how ugly
this beautiful river
seems
to me.

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© 2006 johntaiyu
Published on Thursday, April 6, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: yeah, they're seagulls..they go where the garbage is and it's drifted across this pastoral waste, too..

  • A former member wrote: amazing..the part about "a drunken undergraduate falls off one of the bridges and drowns at the roller dam" really stuck out to me..sort of made this piece really melancholy, sort of twisted with sadness. wonderful write.

  • TaintedButterfly On Thursday, April 6, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    That is priceless John. I loved the way you spoke up for the river. The same thing happens here, and it always makes me sad. I was just at the Ohio river yesterday, and took in all it's beauty, even if it were only in my mind. Thank you for this. Julia~

  • mozarts cat On Thursday, April 6, 2006, mozarts cat (183)By person wrote:

    you've painted a vivid picture with your words .. I could see it as though I was there .. this is a brilliant write =)

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