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Emptiness
By Tangent Ponderings
Emptied vile
My poison ingest
Blowing off life
Like some stupid test
Full of lies
A misguided youth
Given up on love
Searching for truth
Loathing and rage
Hate filled heart
Trying to live
But cant even start
Full of disgusted
Running away
Wanting to leave
But having to stay
Trapped in my mind
Lost in my soul
Gripping so tightly
Yet losing control
Where to go
I've lost my way
Such negative feelings
That wont go away
No reason to try
No will to fight
Running in darkness
In search of the light
Living for something
Reasons like this
Searching or fulfillment
Knowing only emptiness
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© 2006 Tangent Ponderings
Published on Sunday, April 2, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Emptiness"
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A former member wrote:
parts of this made me think the 5th stanza was amazing and the poem in general read very well. ~~Pure1~~
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A former member wrote:
good flow, I do think this poem might have better impact if you added at least a few sylibles to each line.....the poems perfectly fine as it is though
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On Sunday, April 2, 2006, mozarts cat
(184)
wrote:
awesome rhythm and flow to this piece .. great write ~V
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